Archive | Book

23 Elijah rescues the vines

Pull up Caroline’s critique. A week after they started rescuing vines, Elijah led Nathan into the professor’s study for their first progress report. Back1 home, when Elijah helped his father sell wine to caravans on the King’s Highway, Nathan stood with the donkeys and avoided the eyes of the camel pullers who bought the wine. […]

Continue Reading 0

24 Why did your God kill my baby?

Open Mary Pat’s Critique MP. Elijah swung a waterskin down from a pannier. “Neetz keeps spotting new leaves on old vines, Nate.” MP – POV? Neetz poured water onto a vine while her dreamy eyes took in Nathan’s lanky form. On the streets of Jabesh and in the shops where he delivered wine, Nathan ignored […]

Continue Reading 0