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Ch. 5. Tell the king

Elijah held his hand against his swollen jaw and marched into the kitchen. “Mother, I’m going to Fort Jezreel, and I won’t be back for supper.”

Her jet-black eyes widened. “But, son! The queen’s men. Your father’s friends rescued you, but we don’t know anyone at the fort.”

Sheerah looked up. “You can’t leave now, Lijah. It’s almost the Day of Trumpets.”

He brushed past his mother and sister on his way to the cook stove. “Trumpets? I’ll be back tomorrow. What they’re doing is wrong, Sheers, and somebody’s gotta tell ‘em.” He stuffed bread into his pack. “Okay if I load up on these, Mom? You can make more for the day, right?”

His mother rolled her eyes. Elijah plopped down between his brother and father and chomped on bread and olives. “Maybe I’ll discover David’s greatest moment.”

But his father laid his hand on Elijah’s forearm. “King David can wait. Fort Jezreel might be a longer hike than you think. But you haven’t been listening to your mother.”

Elijah turned toward his mother’s brimmed-over eyes, got up, and sat with his arm around her. “Look, Mom. I couldn’t stop that priest from killing Baby Omar, but somebody’s gotta tell the king.”

Her fingers brushed the newly crusted-over gash in his forehead, the purple rims of his eyes, and his split lip. “My little boy.” Her cheeks turned ashen.

He lifted the bowl of fresh figs. “All right if I grab a few?” He dropped six into his pack. Then two more. “And you see how Nathan’s clammed up. If I had a little buddy like Omar and they killed him, I wouldn’t talk, either.

“Nate, can you prune vines today? Tomorrow I’ll help you haul wine.”

His mother looked full into Elijah’s face. “But the fort. The king. You’re only a boy.”

Sheerah slipped her arm into his. “Does my little brother think he’s David, the shepherd lad, visiting the field of battle?”

“Oh, yeah. That’s me, Sheers. I just can’t find my trusty sling and five smooth stones. Dad, you still got that old goatskin robe?”

“Huh! You don’t want that, son. Moths found it. I hung it out in the shed.”

He trotted out the door into the dim light of dawn. A crested lark warbled its familiar whee-whee-wheeoo. He jogged past the well out toward the vineyard. Behind the wine building, he opened the door to the shed in the donkey pen and found his father’s old cloak of goatskins sewn together with the hair turned out. He felt several bare spots where moths had eaten the hair, went back in the house and shrugged into the skin.

“The Lord of Hair.” Sheerah giggled.

He shucked the goatskin off and jammed it into his pack. “Just the thing.”

His mother’s lips trembled. “But in Jezreel they’ll kill you.”

“They’re not going to touch me, Mother.”

Elijah’s father held up a hand. “Your mother’s right, son.”

“Dad, when that priest shoved that baby in the fire, I tried to hide my face in your beard. But hiding didn’t help. Somebody needs to tell them how the Lord feels about burning up little babies. I’m going to Fort Jezreel, and I need your blessing.”

Elijah’s father sighed, opened both hands toward Elijah’s mother, and put his head in his hands.

But Sheerah frowned. “Remember Ma-ahz?”

“Ma-ahz.” Elijah looked at his brother, head down and silent beside their father. “Nathan would quote you the entire story. But, yeah, I know. The speedy guy. Outran the Ethiopian. Show-off.”

He took one quick stride to Nathan’s side.

“That’s not me, Sheers.”

He bent over his brother. “Tomorrow I’ll tell you all about Fort Jezreel. Be talking.”

He shook his head at Sheerah. “I don’t even want to leave home. I like it right here. These limestone walls Mom and Dad laid up and that old stone cook stove. Our vines, our wines, our customers. The world comes to Tishbe. No need to trot over to Jezreel. But I’m going.”

He reached into the pantry and came up with a brick of raisins, a piece of cheese, and a small skin of red wine. “See, Mom.” He plunged them into his pack and headed out the door.

Sheerah laughed. “You’re eating us out of house and home.” She followed him to the well’s limestone wall and held the mouth of his water skin. He pulled up a bucket of water and poured.

He stood to go, but Sheerah held the water skin behind her back. “When Ma-ahz got to the king, he could only say, ‘I saw a lot of confusion.’ Just because you have a few whiskers doesn’t mean you have anything to say.”

“Um, you mean the words.”

She handed him the water skin and wrapped her arms around him. “Of course the words, you silly.” She hugged him tight. “You can’t just tell the king, ‘God’s gonna get you.’”

He pulled her head to his shoulder. “The words, Sheers. I…I’ll work on that.”

His father stepped in and pried Sheerah away. “The little shepherd lad didn’t just sit in the pasture and write poems about Goliath. Listen for the voice of the Lord, son.” He reached up and put his hands on Elijah’s shoulders.

The Lord bless you and keep you; the Lord make His face to shine upon you, and be gracious unto you; the Lord lift up His countenance upon you and give you peace.

“Thank you, my father!”

His father pulled Elijah’s head down and kissed both his cheeks. “Do the right thing.”

Elijah straightened and embraced his mother. As her long chin slid over his shoulder, she wrapped him in a desperate bear hug.

He unwrapped his mother’s arms and wiped at his cheeks with his palm. He grasped the gate, but his mother laid her hands on the top rung. “Milkah.”

The rising sun cast long shadows. Milkah would be leading her father’s sheep into the valley, and he could make a quick detour over the ridge to her pasture.

But, no. His father was right. Fort Jezreel might be a longer hike than he thought.

Elijah hugged his mother again, swung the gate open, and stepped through. “I’ll tell her when I get back.”


Sci-Fi Lijah?

1 Kings 17:1 – “Now Elijah the Tishbite, from Tishbe in Gilead, said to Ahab…”

When did you feel you had to do something extremely difficult?
How important is it to have the blessing of your family on what you do?

4 Responses to Ch. 5. Tell the king

  1. Lois Rolfe October 23, 2018 at 7:36 AM #

    We always want our family’s blessing, but sometimes we have to go where God is leading even if it is NOT our family’s wishes.

  2. Jeanne Doyon October 23, 2018 at 10:46 AM #

    I love how you personalize these stories. You give two dimensional characters a third dimension of humanity.
    Yes, we do wish…want…crave the blessing of family. I say this as I am heading out to get my haircut and on the verge of a whole new look. I haven’t told a soul.

  3. Rose October 25, 2018 at 12:33 AM #

    This is quite inspiring and a great reminder, that regardless of how much we long to be around family, God should be First priority. Whenever He calls us, we should be ready to take the call and answer. I loved this scene! thanks, David!

  4. Anita Archer November 14, 2018 at 1:06 PM #

    You’re making the stories come alive! Thanks!

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